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Adidas
Joined: 04 Jun 2002
Posts: 246
Location: Rotterdam, The Netherlands
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 Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2004 14:15 |
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Songtext/Poem whatever
Hi guys, I'm just in a melancholic mood today and during the very boring work I'm doing today this came outof my pencil:
The world stopped turning today
I had the worst words to say
No one stop me, no one move
I don't know how to say to you
That my love fades away, it's true
Isn't there any solution?
I can't help feeling this way
Wish you would understand me
So I guess this is goodbye my friend
At least, just for today
Is there any hearth I can borough
Give away the feelings I have for you
Flush it down the drain
Together with the sorrow, love and pain
I'm in this stage of live again
where I am all alone
No one is standing besides me
My best friend is gone
By the way, it's not autobiographic.
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JamiroFan2000
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Joined: 21 Mar 2002
Posts: 2881
Location: The Jamiroquaized States Of America
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| Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2004 20:30 |
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Very Nice..;-)
 Hello, :bm_r:
I'm a bit surprised I was the first to reply to this lovely poem  . Beautiful piece Adidas, really nice read, is poetry a hobby of yours? I would like to read more of your work, if there's more. Keep them coming, you know I wrote a Jamiroquai song or two a while back here on Jamirotalk, more like poems than songs. You can check them in the "Music Of Jamiroquai" section, thanks for sharing and take care  ! Peace!
Sincerely,
JamiroFan2000
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Adidas
Joined: 04 Jun 2002
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Location: Rotterdam, The Netherlands
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| Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2004 08:31 |
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Thanks Dude!
Well I'm into singin' at the moment and thinking of writing some song for myself. And sometimes it isn't good enough for a song, but it still is a good thing. So it sounds good, but not for a song!
Well I have another one, but I want to "polish it up" to make it even better.
I had a very boring job last week. I had to make 66 scans for a big client of me and these were very big. So it took me 2 days to finish this. During scanning I had about 10, minutes of waiting, before the scan was ready. So during that time I started writing and this and some more, came out of my head!
Great you liked it! Maybe I'll have a new one next week.
GReetz Adidas
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